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Comments of chapter undefined of Sun God - Soul Land I

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Sun God - Soul Land I

DivineDeathy

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Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

A few grammatical things to point out, there are a few i's in lowercase when they should be capitalized, some random i's capitalized in words like "in" or "if", also ! and ? end a sentence, which means that they should be followed by a capital letter, which are missing in quite a few places, but for some reason a few times they are followed by , which is nonsensical. Otherwise, good first chapter.

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DivineDeathy
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Thx for pointing that out. I'll pay closer attention when reviewing the chapters for editing

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Ronald_Barnwell
Ronald_BarnwellLv13Ronald_Barnwell

This backstory was fire can you give him some anime martial arts to match like Tang San’s martial arts

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Shurasik
ShurasikLv5Shurasik

Thanks for the chapter

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GhostieReadz
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Question, Will the MC have a background like a heir to a hidden family or part of a faction in the spirit hall?

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GaUm_
GaUm_Lv2GaUm_

Thanks for the chapter

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Jaylon_Whitfield
Jaylon_WhitfieldLv3Jaylon_Whitfield

Can you make so he come from a farmer family from tan san village and his parents end up dying so he was raised by his grandpa until he turned 6 and after he test his souls spirt he declines the offer to join tha sprit hall and please don’t make him follow tan San let him have his own journey actually make them Enemy’s and let him still all the beautiful girls

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