AlienWarlord
This is one of the reasons I don’t like kids in fics. They bring unwanted stress and drama. I detest Miles Morales, especially. You already have plenty of diversity. MJ, Ned, and now your daughter Lily are all non-white (since Lily has MJ’s DNA). We don’t need Token Spider-Man added to the mix. I hope he doesn’t get spider powers. I can already see it going in that direction. What’s next? Spider-Gwen? Ugh. Positive commentary: Aside from playing house with having “a kid” and Miles Morales, I like the direction the fic is going, especially his use of the reality stone. Now, he just needs to figure out how to make the changes permanent so he has infinite resources.
Man the miles stuff is gonna make it hard to continue why even bring him in? You already arent following canon so why even have him? Wont Lilly be an adult in a year it would be weird for her to continue being friends with a little kid, considering she'll basically be an adult who wouldn't want to hang out with a child.