AlienWarlord
I am all for the teaser at the end and the whole daughter thing, but it could have been handled differently to make more sense. Such as later if life so that the whole emanation thing wouldn't have been an issue. You were also planning for an A.I. assistant that was better than Tony's, so how did it turn into a daughter? That just came out of nowhere for me. I would have personally wait until after the college bits before introducing a daughter, even then I would have gone for something a little more cannon to the Spider-Man comics. As I remember that in one comic, I can't remember the which off the top of my head, that Spider-Man is brought to a hospital in the city to help a dieing little homeless girl. Since she had no family, the hospital thought to call in Peter because the box she was living in was filled with Spider-Man themed stuff. But sadly, in the end there was nothing he could do for her. I would have had her cured, join the family, named her Peni Parker and gave her a Spider-Man themed mech-suite capable of riveling Stark tech. Yes, this would be a version of the same girl from the comics and movie. Anyway, keep up the good work. I am looking forward to seeing what will come after the family bits.
Miles Morales? Ugh. I hate everything about Miles Morales. Raceswapped and genderbent characters are some of the worst things about comic books. Miles would have been much more fascinating if he got his own original power set and origin. Nobody was asking for Peter Darker. And it reflected in the sales trend over time. It’s like Marvel has been trying so hard to force Miles down our throats.