Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of Immortals, Demons, and Gods

The story is really enjoyable at this point. I wanted to give some of my output for the author. please don't try to make the mc a complete manipulative evil guy , he can be manipulative , cunning e.t.c. but must have a bottom line . Its your choice but I personally don't want to see an mc that is just evil for the sake of evil. if he becomes evil give him some reason or whatever. From this chapter I can see that the mc is arrogant so will his character develop through the story where he learns to draw the line between being confident and being arrogant.

so the mc doesn't know about TDG plot? thats a disappointment was hoping for the mc to take advantage of future knowledge

Interesting story especially since he’s not an anime fan or know about Chinese cliches which makes him FAR more bearable.

Tank yu for the chapter.

Hmm ... Shen Yue ... hmm ... Shen Xiu still on the table? I think so!

thanks for the chapter 👍

If the system didn't interact with the MC then the story would be more compelling. That's the only downside I can find to this fic so far.

tyftc

Thanks for the chapter

does he know story of this world

gracias por el capitulo

thanks for the chapter

Nice history

Thanks 4 the chapter!✌

👍