FireEngine
Im having a hard time figuring out who is who, there are so many characters that I don’t know. All I know is who jake is and some others but it’s hard. When I’m reading I’m trying hard to remember who your talking about. One time I had to go back read a chapter to find out who there person is because I had forgotten like for example the vampire. Dude I still don’t remember her name. Maybe its me I read to quick sometimes, I do pay attention to the clapping chapters more then who is who.
I'm really enjoying the novel so far. I won't lie, sometimes it feels a bit slow but that might be due to there only being a few chapters a day and sometimes even none. As for the chapters themselves, sometimes I feel like only a little happens in them since one scene sometimes takes multiple chapters to finish. Of course at the end of the day, I know you have your own life outside of WN which is why I never said this. I'm only saying it now since you asked us to and I'm one for harsh truths as apposed to joly lies. Still it doesn't matter since in the end, your working hard to bring us these chapters and I really appreciate it. At the end of the day, you should write at a speed that makes you comfortable and don't become a slave to the readers and WN.
If I would add anything to the book maybe an auxiliary chapter with characters and their appearances. It would definitely add a whole new realism to the novel. However I know how hard it can be to find the right pictures that match the characters. I think I speak for all the readers that we love the novel and hope you take it to new heights in the future, and that it turns into a never ending adventure we can all be proud of. Thank you so much for everything!