Uhh okay. I'm not the average WN reader so heres my take on this: That could've been half the words you made it as a lot of the infiltration of the hospital was redundant and pointless. Blanton padding if I believe my first guess.
PLS don't make Harley his love interest. He already has problem dealing with other crazy stuffs don't add more crazy girl in the mix or it will just broke MC's mind