VeganMaster
Hmmm… While the chapter is great, the pacing of the story is starting to become a bit slow in my opinion, because of how large the one piece world, so unless you’re planning to skip somethings, or write a really long novel, I think you should start to pick up the pace a bit. However, this is still the beginning, and based on your previous novels, you always manage to surprise us, so I wouldn’t really worry to much about it. Anyways, I loved this chapter, and hope to see more soon!