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Daoist2MNUUf
Daoist2MNUUfLv14Daoist2MNUUf

Loved this chapter. I was so happy to hear Malachi say he loves her, Ravina. It brought tears to my eyes. Now, I hoe he goes and tells her, and uses the words that he loves her. They deserve happiness, all of them. I wish each couple the very best. I canโ€™t wait for the next chapter.

JasmineJosef
JasmineJosefAuthorJasmineJosef

Ugh. I cry easily so having a headache writing the past chapters ๐Ÿ˜ญ.

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chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

Darcy and Malachi needed that conversation. Glad Malachi told Darcy all that, what he did,what he felt now. The guilt must be overflowing but I commend Darcy for listening and being rational. Not thinking bout the hate, but her sister's love. Everything's in the past, Malachi should just redeem himself by showering Ravina with loads of love and care, and being wiser on what's to come for them, the family and the whole clan. tack Jazzy๐Ÿ˜Š

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Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

Darcy is one strong lady. Malachi is hurting knowing how bad he hurt Ravina and her family, but Darcy knows Ravina truly loves him and needs him by her side. I am so glad that Darcy was able to help him understand. Both sisters are extremely intelligent and have a way with people. I think the three women will be exceptional queens because of everything they have endured. I hope the next chapter doesn't make me ugly cry like this one did ๐Ÿ˜‚

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K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Iโ€™m glad Darcy talked some sense into him. Malachi has become Ravinaโ€™s comfort. She needs him now more than ever; and together they can settle the wrongs of the past. They canโ€™t cure it, but can recover from it. ๐Ÿ’ž

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SuzannaMarie
SuzannaMarieLv13SuzannaMarie

These sisters are formidable and underestimated often. Good for you Darcy ๐Ÿ’ช. Love the strong women in this book and for her to listen to his sadness when her father is on his "deathbed" ๐Ÿ‘ bravo!

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Needmorecoffee
NeedmorecoffeeLv14Needmorecoffee

Omg, when be pointed at his heart ๐Ÿ˜ข that got me... Thank you Darcy ๐Ÿ’—

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Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

So much pain all these characters ๐Ÿ’” but it brought them closer. I knew these two would get along. They love the same person and Ravina's love will bring them together. Malachi had me in tears there ๐Ÿฅบ. Glad he got some pep talk to help him find courage again

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Mary_Lee_0960
Mary_Lee_0960Lv14Mary_Lee_0960

it sure doesn't feel right not voting for this [img=faceslap] omg great chapter Jasmine. so heart felt. I didn't think Darcy had it in her.

Jesk8
Jesk8Lv15Jesk8

Malachi being honest and vulnerable with Darcy. Darcy setting aside her hatred to take care of Malachiโ€™s heart, which is in the best interest of Ravinaโ€™s heart. This is tremendous growth between Malachi and Darcy and will only strengthen their bond. It looks like the start of a beautiful friendship.

Kemistics_01
Kemistics_01Lv14Kemistics_01

....respect even admiration, as Darcy sees, feels and understands the essence of Malachi she was struggling to reconcile with her experience and past beliefs

Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

๐™๐™๐™š๐™จ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™ง๐™š๐™š ๐™˜๐™ค๐™ช๐™ฅ๐™ก๐™š๐™จ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™จ๐™ก๐™ค๐™ฌ๐™ก๐™ฎ ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง๐™ข๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™– ๐™ซ๐™š๐™ง๐™ฎ ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™—๐™ค๐™ฃ๐™™. ๐™๐™๐™š๐™ž๐™ง ๐™›๐™ง๐™ž๐™š๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ๐™๐™ž๐™ฅ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™œ๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข ๐™š๐™–๐™˜๐™ ๐™ค๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™ก๐™š๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™ค๐™ฃ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™ž๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™–๐™ก๐™จ๐™ค ๐™œ๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ง๐™š๐™ฃ๐™œ๐™ฉ๐™ ๐™ฌ๐™๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ฎ ๐™–๐™ง๐™š ๐™ฌ๐™š๐™–๐™ . ๐™„๐™ฉ ๐™ฌ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™œ๐™ž๐™ซ๐™š ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š๐™ข ๐™๐™š๐™–๐™ก๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™œ ๐™›๐™ง๐™ค๐™ข ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™ฅ๐™–๐™จ๐™ฉ, ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™™ ๐™๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™š ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐™ฉ๐™๐™š ๐™›๐™ช๐™ฉ๐™ช๐™ง๐™š. ๐™„๐™ฉ ๐™ข๐™ž๐™œ๐™๐™ฉ ๐™š๐™ซ๐™š๐™ฃ ๐™ก๐™š๐™–๐™™ ๐™ฉ๐™ค ๐™– ๐™˜๐™ช๐™ง๐™š ๐™›๐™ค๐™ง ๐˜ผ๐™ง๐™š๐™จ. ๐™’๐™š ๐™˜๐™–๐™ฃ ๐™จ๐™ฉ๐™ž๐™ก๐™ก ๐™๐™ค๐™ฅ๐™š!! โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ๐Ÿคž๐Ÿคžโ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

I glad kia and dracy had this talk they needed it. So they can get closer

Marina_Sch
Marina_SchLv14Marina_Sch

This way of writing Jasmine, I am all teary over here ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿฅฒโ™ฅ๏ธ

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

A fellowship bond is developing between Kai and Darcy. That will make Ravina shed tears of joy. Another, tearjerking chapter Jazz. Filled with so much emotions.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

I am so glad he ameant that he love ravina. And now he need to tell her

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Mind the bond! Malchi overwhelmed with guilt and to share it with all people Darcy. What a great way to mind the wounds of the past..Darcy listening and Malchi expressing the guilt he feels for the pain he caused Ravnia and Darcy! Yet he loves Ravania and Darcy advice speaks volumes. You canโ€™ t help but feel each emotion expressed in this chapter..

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Mary_Lee_0960
Mary_Lee_0960Lv14Mary_Lee_0960

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Sacoguns
SacogunsLv15Sacoguns

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Hollygolightly
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