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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Pam_Bierle
Pam_BierleLv15Pam_Bierle

Ummm. Malachi. Siren food or plaything. Go save, please.

Amons
AmonsLv4Amons

probably wanted to just make him sleep? I mean, they seem to be a very secretive race for the dragons to not recognize their scent. The smell of sea water that strong coming from a person should already be very weird.

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Ok, these two are cute, but I’m gonna need them to go get Malachi.

Marianne33
Marianne33Lv14Marianne33

Malachi in trouble somewhere and these two just having fun 🤣🤣. Oh Ares! These games...I am here for it lol.

SuzannaMarie
SuzannaMarieLv13SuzannaMarie

So much naughtiness and playfulness with these two. One passionate and the other adventurous. Now how will he explain his healed leg? I think Malachi is just distracted by someone who wants to protect Ares.

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SuzannaMarie
SuzannaMarieLv13SuzannaMarie

Jasmine!! I will be waiting to that visual LOL.

Hazel_Cat_Eyes
Hazel_Cat_EyesLv15Hazel_Cat_Eyes

This was sweet… but where the heck is Malachi!!!!!!!!!!!

P_P_7568
P_P_7568Lv14P_P_7568

Captivating! Ares is healed and rhe playful game catch me if you cna was delightful. Glad to see Naz and Ares having their moment. So, are they going to go help Malchi now? Plus how is Ares going to explain his miraculous recovery? Like to see how Jaz works this one….but she always coming through! Loved it 🥰

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

So relieved to see Ares being fine and alright🥰Their chasing game is cute though🤭I'm just wondering if Ares will have legs when he returns as human? Or has he accepted his true origins and fate? what about Malachi? who got him? was it just a distraction for him not to find out of Ares in a sea demon form? tack Jazzy😊

Needmorecoffee
NeedmorecoffeeLv14Needmorecoffee

Ares is fine although I wasn't worried. I am not worried much for Malachi either but why would this person help Ares if they did? Who is it? How will Ares explain his healed leg? But first... is Ares himself? Is he giving in or is it just the thirst of blood making him like this? He said it wouldn't happen again ( I have no complaints) but it seems he wants it to happen now. So many questions. Loved the chapter.

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SuzannaMarie
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Marianne33
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Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Whew!! This is an action-packed and fast moving chapter. I enjoyed the playfulness between Ares and Nazneen.

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chinawa
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Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

This chapter is full of surprises. So much mystery. Hope Malachi is okay and will soon awaken. Will he remember what happened? Or will he be made to forget it to protect Ares true identity?. Was it Ares in his demon form who hypnotised 😵‍💫 Malachi or something else?🤔🧐 Nazneem saw something delved in the water and reappeared as Ares, in all his glory🤔 Such a swift turnaround in Ares character. The human side is pragmatic the demon side the machoistic hunter. Very interesting contrasts. Ares swift change in attitude towards Nazneem, was this brought about by him overhearing Malachi and Ravina romantic moment. Great chapter full of mystery Jazzy.

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

It looks like Ares has finally excepted that Ravina is Malachi's and Nazneen is his. His feelings have been growing for Nazneen even though he still loves Ravina. It's time to except and mate. Now that he is healed, they can play.

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kodash1
kodash1Lv14kodash1

well it has been proven that man act different when they are hungry. Don't fall for it Ness.

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Dali07
Dali07Lv15Dali07

Is it normal for Ares to be like that with Nazz? I tought he didn’t like her.

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