Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame
Touch of Flame
JasmineJosef
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Can I just admire the gentleman that is AresđđđSo manly in every wayđđ„ But I wonder is he hurting now that he knew he can't have Ravina?đ„ș As for Nazneen,you just be yourself, Ares will love you for that (I think he enjoys watching over you, he knows what he has to do as well-- the only thing that's stopping him is that he didn't want to get go close as he think bout his dea th) Looking forward to this talk with Ephraim. Did he bring Darcy with him? Will Ares see Darcy?(just in case) tack for the chap,Jazzy, đ
Ah so the meeting is about to happen! I cannot wait for Ares to meet Ephraim. I wonder what Area will tell him, especially anything about Ravina? Will Ephraim ask if Ares knows of a dragon king with a human breedmate? I feel a bit bad for Nanzeen. She is like a fish out of waterâout of a dragon clan, not in the time period she once knew. So many things have changed⊠And amongst that, she just wants her breedmate to accept her. And now she has this jealousy brewing for this other woman⊠and she wonât know that the princess is not a threat to her and her feelings for Ares.
Jasmine, thank you for another great chapter. I love the sense of humor that you have your characters express. Nazneen did not hesitate to ask how to seduce a human male. But she must keep in mind that Ares is human + something else that is later to be revealed. Jasmine, when is the big reveal of the other half of Aresâ DNA?
The connection keeps getting closer and closer! Will Ephraim recognize Nanzeen? I think he will and will be quite shockedâŠbut doubt he will show that reaction. Does he know of the demise of King Tural? That would be huge news to Ares and Nanzeen. It would put an urgency to their mission to get Nanzeen back on the throne. But, in the meantime, Ephraim holds information that is very important to Ravina. All of the connection are dangling in the air just waiting to become attached! I am quite excited for the next chapter! â„ïžâ„ïžâ„ïž
Nazneen is growing slowly and Ares is just the right person for her. She is becoming less emotional and taking moment to think which is a good sign. Ares has this silent support. He shows that he understands the hardships she has been through and makes it as comfortable for her as possible. It was really sweet how he even told his servants not show fear so she would feel comfortable. He might not feel the breedmate pull, but he is human and has feelings and his own struggles and It was good to see Nazneen hold back a bit and know not to be angry with him over something he has no control over. Good things don't come for free and if you are not willing to put effort for your breedmate then I am not sure what is so special about them. I don't think Ephraim would bring Darcy with him unless he is sure it is a safe place. Excited to see them meet.
Yay! The first meeting of many, I hope. I hope they figure out that Darcy and Ravina are sisters and Ares explains that Ravina is with Malachi. I wonder if Lord Dragenski has heard of what happened to the Z clan king yet. Maybe Nazneen can fly Ares and Ephraim can fly Darcy / Corrina to see Malachi and Ravina.
What an outstanding chapter. I love that youâve made them longer! The way Ares and. Naz is developing it is fun to read! The fact all 3 couples had their different challenges. It just gets better and better! Cant wait to see if Darcy shows up, Ares will know right away who she is..:.canât get enough of these great chapters!!!!âđđđđ
