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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

Daoist2MNUUf
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See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Tina_Roberts_1551
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Please we need another chapter

Juujuu_Sky
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Oh wow!! A great chance for them to be close. That was an awesome chapter, Jazz. Not a single word wasted. You're such an amazing authoršŸ’–

K_Deck
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Oh no, Malachi is in bad shape. I wonder if itā€™s even possible for him to get better without her care?

0rtiz113
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Here come Ravina the nurseā€¦ She will help him heal I hope. May e they Can heal eachother of their pass trauma.

DespinaNY
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Wouldnā€™t it be awesome if the cure was for them to mate? šŸ˜‚ Sorry, my minds always in the gutterā€¦ Just canā€™t get enough of the steamy scenes. I do have a question though Jasmine! šŸ™‹šŸ»ā€ā™€ļø Is there an actual mating bond that snaps into place after they actually ā€œmateā€ that would cause Ravina to feel any kind of connection with him?

Eulinda_Ogiste
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Ravina, your new plan is that of ā€œThe Dragon Tamerā€. Very promising interaction between the two of you. Hopefully, you will be allowed to assist Malachai in the healing process. Another great chapter Jasmine.

P_P_7568
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NO no no no! You canā€™t leave the chapter like this! It just felt like Ravania and Malachi was connecting. Regardl ess of what was said they were being open and honest! Ravania helping him with the horse at the end tells me she will take care of him. Darn it had to end! Loved loved loved it! šŸ’•šŸ’•šŸ’•

Kathleen_Blessing
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Ravina telling him she needs him and being honest with him, helps him gain respect for her and now that she knows how sick he is she is going to have to nurse him back to health.

Lynette_Lucas
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Jasmine, todayā€™s chapter was great just as your chapters always are. You left me wanting more and more chapters. Hopefully, what happened at the end of this chapter is the beginning of the path to Ravina and Malachi understanding each otherā€™s past traumas. Malachi was already in poor condition prior to his falling from the horse. I hope he did not suffer additional injuries. Someone is going to have to help Ravina get Malachi up from the ground. I hope it will be Aaron. The other brothers will likely throw the blame of Malachiā€™s fall on Ravinaā€™s fragile shoulders.

chinawa
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Ravina's healing touchšŸ„°Let her help you,Malachi! This could probably be the start of them getting closer and them understanding each otheršŸ„° thank you jazzyšŸ˜Š

kt_cali
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It is interesting learning of Ravinas new plan.

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Onix_Rain25
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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

Needmorecoffee
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See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

amy_la
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Canā€™t wait for the next chapter ā¤ļø

Paschalinelily
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My spirit was at peace reading this chapter... Thank you Jazz for writing so beautifully ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

Boreas17
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Ravina to the rescuešŸ¤­

m_small
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They will blame her for this. šŸ˜„

shelia_payne
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Waiting with bated breath!

Ms_JenTaylor
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Fall right into her arms! Sheā€™ll have to care for you and accidentally fall herself. Fall in love that is.

QueenHalloween16
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Eeek! I love it when characters get sick! The scenes are always so cute šŸ„°