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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

JasmineJosef
JasmineJosefAuthorJasmineJosef

Some you asked for visual of how Ravina is dressed. I found a picture to give an idea of how it looks.

Mikela_Herbel
Mikela_HerbelLv11Mikela_Herbel

This reminds of egyptian clothing beautiful style of clothing. His mother knows how to interfere if i were Malachi it would be hard to distract my beast from that outfit. it’s no wonder he stopped paying attention to her during breakfast too

chinawa
chinawaLv15chinawa

It's time to get to know Malachi, Ravina, not as an experimental subject but as the son to his mother, brother to his siblings,king to his people, him as the dragon!The good and (bad) sides of him. Hopefully Ravina sees him in a different light. Love their feisty interaction, maybe it'll change soon hehe. thanks for the chap Jazzy💕

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

I think Ravina is going to fall in love with one of those horses. She has detached herself from what had brought her joy because of the pain caused by loss. Hopefully, Ravina will loosen up and have fun when she is with Aaron.

esmerlopez23
esmerlopez23Lv14esmerlopez23

Great strategy, she is purposely trying to get Vina and Kai to learn how to co-exist (which almost failed cuz Vina tried stabbing him already lol 😂) Aaron is a great addition I have a feeling that he will become a great friend to Vina he will be her confidant, supporter and defender this will open Kai’s eyes to see that his brother who is not her breedmate can see the best in her so why cant he??? I am sure that at some point when he sees Aaron has broken Vinas ice walls it will push him him to be everything that Aaron will be to her and much more. In the other hand Vina will learn more of Kai and their people through Aaron and he will be the one to give her back hope and will show her not all dragons 🐉 are after the same purpose🔥 he will help her see with a new set of eyes and will help her heal slowly

Lynette_Lucas
Lynette_LucasLv14Lynette_Lucas

Jasmine, thank you for the lovely chapter. It is too bad that it had to come to an end. I believe Aaron amd Ravina will get along splendidly. Malachi’s behavior disappointed me. He could have at least said: “See you later” or something of that nature to Ravina prior to his leaving the dining table,

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Ivette_M11
Ivette_M11Lv15Ivette_M11

Thank you Jasmine for this chapter very beautiful. Love the mom and now seeing the picture I can see why Malachi didn’t to look at her. He could of easily devoured with kisses. I Do hope Aaron and Ravina can learn to trust each other and he can tell her the guilt and pain Malachi carries. Glad you are feeling better Jasmine! Prayers and hugs for you!

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

Yep I hope she will start riding again she need some joy in her life for once

K_Deck
K_DeckModeratorK_Deck

Hmmmm…. Is it a good idea to go to the stabke with Aaron? What will Malachi think?!

Kathleen_Blessing
Kathleen_BlessingLv15Kathleen_Blessing

I wonder if Aaron will explain about Malachi's guilty feelings and open her eyes about his sister. Maybe if she knows what happened, that Malachi wanted peace like her father did and that he took his sister to her breedmate and what the humans did to her, Ravina will understand his actions and her heart will start to melt some of that icy wall she has built up around her heart ❤. On the other hand if Malachi sees she can feel something weather it be tears or laughter with his brother, he will let his guard down a little or feel a jealous and want that same attention from his breedmate. Something has to give to get them to open up and talk to each other and truly feel and understand about each other's actions.

aoi_hoshi_cath88
aoi_hoshi_cath88Lv15aoi_hoshi_cath88

Thanks for the chapter and sure will be waiting for more on what's to come up next with them...would this be just fine for Ravina going with Aaron to the stables? would Malachi mind with this? 🤔👀

Eulinda_Ogiste
Eulinda_OgisteLv15Eulinda_Ogiste

Araminta and Aaron, will be supportive of Ravina. Another great chapter, Jazz.

Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

I hope kia see ravina with Aaron at the stable togather having fun

Needmorecoffee
NeedmorecoffeeLv14Needmorecoffee

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Boreas17
Boreas17Lv14Boreas17

i hope they will be best friends with Aaron. if Malachi sees this is he gonna be jealous?

Onix_Rain25
Onix_Rain25Lv15Onix_Rain25

another yummy chapter. I'm hoping for more of Malachi and Ravina, maybe take a little break from Ares for a few chapters lol

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Ivette_M11
Ivette_M11Lv15Ivette_M11

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Tina_Roberts_1551
Tina_Roberts_1551Lv15Tina_Roberts_1551

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Hollygolightly
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amy_la
amy_laLv14amy_la

Thank you for the chapter and the tension continues to build 😜

Kemistics_01
Kemistics_01Lv14Kemistics_01

Aaron! How sweet? Yay Ravina, she has found someone who would engage her in conversation as well as provide her with information about Malachi!!!🤭🤗🤗 Now now, the thing about information🤭🤭. While giving her the upper hand with regards to knowledge about Malachi, it also sensitizes her to him! Woohooo!!! Yay, well played Aramita! Go Aaron, underhanded him🤭🤭🤭