Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Flame

I want to clarify something because it matters to me. There seems to be confusion around the abuse happening in the story. Yes, abuse is happening and it is happening in the context of war, revenge, and between enemies. And whatever forgiveness or moving on that might happen will also be from that. I am not writing abuse between a romantic couple. That is all. Onix, don't donate your kidney. Come to my discord Jasminejosef#6939 to stay sane until the next update instead 😂. Thank you for the gifts all❤️

Agghh… the pain and internal conflict our two leads have. It is just heartbreaking to think of the sadness and trauma they have indured. It’s no wonder neither wants to give in to their perceived enemy. 💔

Such a fitting title for this chapter ❤️. My heart is aching for poor Malachi. He seems to have endured so much just as Ravina has. They are both too stubborn, but so deserving of true love. Neither one is going to make this easy.

poor Amal🥺😔Wonder what the human breedmate did to her to have the black dragon clan hate humans so much and to think of them as enemy? They won't trust Ravina either. I'm a bit relieved though that Mah is hopeful that Ravina can be different and that things could change for Malachi and her. The hate will surely go on 🥺😥😔 Poor Malachi for hurting this much💔💔especially if being reminded of his sister.😭The guilt stays with in him, that's so burdensome for her. thanks for the chap!💕

There is always another said of any story. So sad for what his sister had to go through and 😔 makes me wonder who the human was? 🤔 His mother is completely different than I thought. I didn’t expect her to be the one who would try to convince him to move on and be hopeful. Absolutely love the rollercoaster of emotions from this story! One moment I dislike the main characters or their actions, the next chapter I love them and feel so sad for them! Thank you dear author for such a well written plot!!!

I wonder what happened to Amal. Seems like she had a human breed mate who did nothing but hurt her till her death. 😢😢 I hope both Malachi and Ravina can get rid of their hate at some point in time. Even though I wonder when that will ever happen. BTW I'm team Malachi, 🤭

So it seems like this human breedmate did something evil to Amal that made her end her life and used the breedmate thing against her ?? Then this will be much harder to mend. He will not trust Ravina easily especially knowing what she intends to do what the breedmate thing 😥😰

Now why do I feel like there is a connection between Ares dream and Amal. I feel like there is a connection between Ares and Malachi other than thru Ravina. also I feel this whole thing is also related to the dragon tamer thing. woah I am so hooked up to this story, I want more.🤲🤲 But I can't ask.😭😭😭😭😭

wow. so a little light on why Malachi is behaving the way he is. it's... it's sad and I hope Raveena comes around and doesn't stay the cold self that she is. it's a very dirty trick that she has planned and yes she has all intention of using her being his breedsmate against him so somewhere down the line Malachi is not wrong.

And I thought the last chapter was excruciating 😞. We finally understand how and why Malachi has suffered. We were worried about and for Ravina, but this is so much more. I can’t even imagine thinking you are saving your dear sibling, only to find that her savior was worse than what you were saving her from. I totally get what he is saying - if humans don’t feel the same pull of the breedmate relationship, and have zero respect for its sacred part in the dragons life, then what is the point?? And Ravina just proves his point. She and her lover released him in the hopes that he would take her home so she could continue to torture him and take down his people from the inside. Imagine if she became pregnant - what night she do with his child? And like we thought his mother, in the way of mothers, has the same romantic view that he did before his sister took her life. But even she cannot deny the seemingly hopeless nature of the situation. If his sisters breedmate let to her ultimate destruction because he in no way felt the pull and did not cherish and protect her, then why would Ravina be any different? Especially when she has already admitted as such??

i understand Malachi's point but he shouldn't judge Ravina as she's the same person caused Amal's death just becuz she's human too. She has no good intentions but he saw she lived horrible things. her feelings are valid too. maybe her feelings will change in time. right now there's no way for them becuz both Amal's and Ravina's parents or Uncle and mom deaths and sister's disappearance remains as big obstacles. Amal took her own life in the end. i'm so sad for her. Malachi doesn't know yet but Ravina has suicidal thoughts since that time too. She's not tough as she seems

Oh things Could be different if the truth was shared by all

I feel so sad for Kai. Not too sad though...cuz I believe him losing his sister wasn't anything compared to Ravina who lost her whole family. Let the violence continue 🤫

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Wow, this was such a sad chapter. I understand it’s going to be really difficult for Kai to trust Vina after what happened to his sister. Please tell us more about Amal!

If his mother is crying just thinking of it and he has a hard time speaking about it... I wonder what her breedmate did to her? He said he still hears her screams. From what?

So sad about Amal.

Onix is right.. Jasmine's stories can make you sell a kidney just to see how the story will unfold 🥺🥺🥺

Jasmine, I appreciate the knowledge that I gained from reading this chapter. Now, of course, I hunger for more. Malachi blames himself for his sister’s death. He shouldn’t take responsibility for it nor should he continue to punish himself because of it. Amal chose to kill herself. It is time for both Malachi and Ravina to put forth the necessary effort to reach a point where they can at least have civil discourse. I hope Ravina soon knows the story of Amal’s death.

Amal's suicide is horrible no matter what caused her to do that. Her breedmate being the reason had to stoke the fire of their hatred for the humans. I do feel bad for Malachi because he knows that Ravina is using his mate bond against him. If the humans felt that same pull, they wouldn't be able to weaponize it. Poor Amal being treated that bad from her mate to want to die is just horrible. I don't think that started their hate for humans but it certainly didn't help. If he and Ravina were able to talk about WHY they hate each other, they would know they each have a lot going on that the other isn't aware of. I'm okay with the abuse they inflict on the other right now because as they say all is fair in love and war and we're in a war. I do feel bad that he and Ravina have so much hurt going on.