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Comments of chapter undefined of Holy Necromancer: Rebirth of the Strongest Mage

RafaelMitz
RafaelMitzLv3RafaelMitz

I swear to you, Author, this chapter saved the rhythm of the previous ones. Come on, there was a childhood friend and romantic interest early on, a dumb extra wanting to kill the future prodigy of the church of light, the dumb people who didn't think that Gabriel might have been kidnapped or something and who didn't bother to investigate, the townspeople who saw Gabriel arriving barefoot, shirtless and dirty and no one thought anything was wrong... Look how many bad points. This chapter made things better. Although Gabriel was very innocent in revealing the secret, it makes sense for him to do so. After all, we are talking about his childhood friend and passion, the only person who could help him at that moment, in his thoughts. Her reaction was also understandable when we think of the church's profound brainwashing. Very good, author.

Pachu72_Lee
Pachu72_LeeLv14Pachu72_Lee

sigh, this kid really needs to think more like all those people are like religious fanatic

shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

I know where maya is coming from as she believes whatever the churches advocate and has been brainwashed since childhood to believe that stuff but I still can't help but hate her a little knowing she is doing with the thoughts of helping gabriel but still to not even listen to your childhood friend and straightaway try to kill him just because of a mark.

Indescency
IndescencyLv15Indescency

Thank you for not making this cliché! You have no idea how much I appreciate that!

Ashir_Rehman
Ashir_RehmanLv1Ashir_Rehman

I am so glad this happened couldn't take his naiveness for long now that he will become enemy of the world and his darling would become his enemy he would get his push into maturity and gaining some more intelligence he wasn't stupid because he understood he needed protection of the darkness so he learned a spell

Harrowdaddy
HarrowdaddyLv4Harrowdaddy

The novel gets dumber with every chapter I read, like if he was smart he could have shown her he still had the element of light and if that didn’ work. I’m pretty sure he could summon the book using his mind, it’ also hila that he’s thinking of other people when a weapon that can kill him is coming to him.

SioMino
SioMinoLv15SioMino

So. I’m guessing Maya won’t be part of the harem, huh?

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

This evil cult of light taught all their people these things so that this cult of light can kill off a competitor for the top spot on the power tower. They wanted to be the only ones so they taught everyone that if they have a dark element it means they are evil...... What a bunch of morons who judge everything by their cover and not their deeds.

xFKratos
xFKratosLv15xFKratos

That chapter was kinda pretty bad written in my opinion. MC is suddenly the typical single digit IQ idiot and his friend brainwashed beyond reason. Gonna give this a few more chapters but thats not a good start.

Furkan_The_Newbie
Furkan_The_NewbieLv12Furkan_The_Newbie

For a moment I thought it was going to be a cliché. This twist was really perfect

Russian_Ace
Russian_AceLv11Russian_Ace

alright, interesting. i'll admit this is the first thing this novel has done that i like, he's going to kick off his adventure in this world having to probably kill his childhood friend because of religious brainwashing

Myspace_iscool
Myspace_iscoolLv14Myspace_iscool

That was way faster than I thought it was going to be.

Robert_C_7044
Robert_C_7044Lv15Robert_C_7044

Really dude cliche much

ayofiggy
ayofiggyLv14ayofiggy

UnsterblichPlebb
UnsterblichPlebbLv4UnsterblichPlebb

can't wait for the massacre that's bout to happen

Tad_LaRue
Tad_LaRueLv15Tad_LaRue

So many awful things have happened with good intentions.

Urbano_Abanto_Joey
Urbano_Abanto_JoeyLv3Urbano_Abanto_Joey

Wow this was reminds me of asta black grimoer 7 petals amazing😍

modey110
modey110Lv3modey110

Deleted12354
Deleted12354Lv3Deleted12354

Nah, ye, I tried.

Operon101
Operon101Lv1Operon101

I need a scout. Does the writing get better ?

elonboss
elonbossLv1elonboss

can you explain properly, how did they know if he's inside the house, HES INSIDE THE HOUSE RIGHT, HOWS EVERYONE SEEING THE MC, IF ITS THE SKY MAYBE OK , add more explanation