darran_
Alright, so the first 2 chapters are plot wise not very new to me so I can't say anything good about that. Anyway, the grammar and phrasing has been really good so far. As for the Demons looking like humans other then their horns, claws, black skin or even wings is rather not very much to my tatse but I will accept it...for now if the story doesn't become on of those with tons of girls....