Comments of chapter undefined of I'm on TV! (Showbiz SI)

I love this version way more you’re showing so much more it’s great

I like these changes to the story. And I think Rowling would actually be open to making them while she was drafting the story. She had tons of pages of preparatory writings spelling out the crafting of the world and vast troves of information about even the most minor aspect of the Wizarding world. She also was adamant about certain aspects of the plot. But I don’t think she’d mind changing some things like this to improve characterization. Harry was very one-note in the story. Anything he can do to make him more likable would be nice. Since the MC has access to the future internet, he should give her a complete list of the most common criticisms for the upcoming books. It might help her.

nice.. He is doing everything he can to cover all the little patches that he can influence

As usual, thank you for the chapters!

You should have him start making music from his previous life that would be made in the future and become a famous musician actor and author but music is the easiest way to get rich and it would be cool if mc got into a relationship with Taylor swift or maybe someone els idk lol.

Thanks for the chapter. I liked the previous story but this one is better since it is more detailed.

Kind of surprised that JK Rowling hasn't adopted him yet.

Me who knows absolutely nothing about Harry Potter.

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for the chapters

tftc~~~○●