Comments of chapter undefined of The Martial Unity
The Martial Unity
Lord_Streak
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(Constructive criticism)The MC has the mind of a 50-year-old man but he's so naive, that's something I never understood in these protagonists who come back in the body of a child, Everyone says he's more mature for his age, but they're always very childish for his mental age. Also since he didn't feel resentment towards this girl, she hit him because she wanted to and made him fail at something he had been planning for years to go through, But still he didn't feel anger that's completely impossible any human being will be angry or resentful, it was years of dedication and training Sai hurts a rich girl and hits him because he found him interesting, and he didn't feel anything for it ????? Bro if you want to put romance in this novel at least put it right
this theory of the kid on a horse throwing the ball is pretty flawed if you think about it, the reason is the wind, if a kid if a child throws a ball at a dragon at high speed at the moment he throws the ball the ball will not hit the adult it will go backwards because of the wind, so it doesn't make much sense
No resentment? Pathetic. Loser and cowardly mentality. Martial arts is not a competition you wimp. It's self defence for the very least. And lethal self defence. Kill to protect. Kill to kill. Thrash to thrash. He should beat her to polp, incur her great losses to even out the balance. If not you have a weak heart, unfocused will.
