Ramirys
really like the novel, the update rare is way to slow for my taste but i will keep reading as long as its not dropped, i have several things related to the novel that i would like you clarify 1st is damage - it does not bother me but the damage itself seems somewhat arbitary as there is no clear numerical values that can suggest how much one attack is as well as how much one defense is, as i see you want to take the novel background into more realistic approuch so called hp points and damage has little to no meaning but i suggest to make it consistent or give clear sense of numerical value untill it need to be discarded to more realistic settings 2nd - i like the group approuch but i wish the mc to be more powerful and unique, so far they have no skills or unique items to make them stand from the rest, they purely relay on weapon combat with superhuman body quality but the mc is not super swordman or godly archer who can decimate dozens of players with just his skills with weapons, he does seem much more skilled from the beginings but progress is slow, his stregth does not seems to be matching main character levels as of yet 3rd - again related to skills \ items \ bloodline, when i imagne skills in dvr i imagne countless skills trees expending into character unique build or a character who can manipulate mana and accomplish countless skill on his own like (control mana and use runes as medium for runic magic so he can create spells and such or control mana to streghten the body for close combat) but so far there is nothing but bland 2 skills per class there is no skill tree, no mention how one get skills or is expending on the original skills so you need a certain to unlock the rest? All of it is unkown and really needs to be adressed, the unique items and items in general in my opinion needs more than simple stats increase, more spells and specail effects attached to them so you can show more magical items worth, and finally bloodlines i see bloodlines route as diging further into bloodline and getting skills and stats as welll as racial traits, slowly evolving into superior beign, but as bloodline were not truely introduced yet i will refrain from suggesting about this aspect all in all i really like the novel hope you can balance work and novel so there will updates more frequently and keep the good work!