Comments of chapter undefined of Beast Evolution

Lots of potential for this novel but power scaling seems to be the immediate concern although you seem a plan... hopefully. if i could give you any advice and hope for the best is a loose outline and flesh it out as you go as the MC’s main goal right now seems ambiguous and simple goals right now... i look forward to how this novel progresses

am I the only one who thinks that the story has something that make you wanna stay

your book is good but your Mc is not a beast he's more human than a beast which makes reading this weird. I know he was human before but not anymore he's a bloody beast why doesn't he act like one.

So how come he's not getting crystals anymore?

Great chapter

World building looking a little trash and the characters don't have any descriptions, leaves to much just for imagination, you should write something like "Ray saw 4 Kobold's leaving the cave, those beasts have a dog head that resemble a husky, one of them in particular has white fur and a scar running through his left eye".

Thanks for the hard work