Good beginning! There's improvement in the writing, it has great potential, but still too short for me to give a review.
Keep up the good work, and don't burn yourself out.
Maybe he only feels pain when he consumes the crystal of monsters with some form of intelligence such as a goblin or a golem summoning mage and no pain from regular golem crystal was golems do not think at the current level they are atđâď¸đ¤
