loved this, so sad the author dropped this book

you can't have a fire without wood same goes for a story, you can't have a good story if you're confused and dont have a clue what is going on plus the filler makes the characters feel more human and real not like a shut in like you would know

at the end the guy just leaves. what a boomer

feels rush mate

Well I think he rushed this chapter that's why

Though if you really want someone to proofread I got time on the weekends :->

Cheers for the chapter king, and also if you want someone to proofread you can use Grammarly it does the job of correcting incorrect words and other bits of grammar.

Well this is your typical writer, writing a review for his own work. totally not based and I'm definitely not doing this for the troll line heh heh :)

is the short spear a type of half spear of something like an Ilkwa?

truck-kun to the rescue ☺

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