Hope to see the next chapter soon. I really like the first. Also, don't put pressure on yourself when writing and ignore negatif comments who only insult you.
Ohh wow, that’s one long chapter. How many words was it ? Either way don’t make the mistakes many authors do that is making their mc very op and decides they need to nerf them afterwards. And good luck to you on writing this novel because novel like this are hard to write. Thanks for the chapter.