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Comments of chapter undefined of My boyfriend can control the darkness

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Katie_Torres_3147
Katie_Torres_3147Lv13Katie_Torres_3147

This is a fun read. I like that the king taught those mean men a lesson. The prince just needs some confidence. you did a great job with showing his emotions.

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TheFirstFirefly
TheFirstFireflyLv1TheFirstFirefly

my goodness, i was drawn into the story that i felt their emotions in me. Good job!

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bluerabyss
bluerabyssLv3bluerabyss

That was beautiful. You are up to a good and fiery start! Got me hooked up! šŸ”„šŸ”„šŸ”„

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Ariel_x
Ariel_xLv3Ariel_x

so much love for this first chapteršŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

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seraph205
seraph205Lv1seraph205

I love this book... keep it up LovešŸ’•

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Jamie_Kelly_5188
Jamie_Kelly_5188Lv4Jamie_Kelly_5188

Meeen,am getting to love this authoress

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NanotechPikachu
NanotechPikachuLv3NanotechPikachu

It's a five star 1st chapter

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ARU
ARULv12ARU

If someone stare at me... I will feel weird toošŸ˜«šŸ˜£ Hooking Chapter .

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Dehni_Olsen
Dehni_OlsenLv14Dehni_Olsen

I think the first chapter brought in a lot of unique characters. I especially liked his body guard and Melody!

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MagneBP666
MagneBP666Lv2MagneBP666

Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading

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Firelorn_P_King
Firelorn_P_KingLv10Firelorn_P_King

Wow, that was really interesting. It's a completely different world view.

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Mylittledragon
MylittledragonLv3Mylittledragon

thanks for the chapter!!

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Champsing
ChampsingLv4Champsing

I really like Melody's point of view... What does our main character look like?

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Little_North_Star
Little_North_StarLv13Little_North_Star

Oh the start was so good[img=recommend]

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0Mashroom
0MashroomLv30Mashroom

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The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

^_^

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Grandmasters
GrandmastersLv3Grandmasters

Wow! A very interesting start. The story sure gave me an enjoyable read...... šŸ˜Ž

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Adityo_WN
Adityo_WNLv12Adityo_WN

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Amitabha_Vardha
Amitabha_VardhaLv11Amitabha_Vardha

Interesting, well written, captures attention and keeps it. what more could you ask for in a book? lol this was good.

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Sunny_Shumail
Sunny_ShumailLv14Sunny_Shumail

Very interesting and intriguing first chapter. Can't wait to read more.