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my goodness, i was drawn into the story that i felt their emotions in me. Good job!
That was beautiful. You are up to a good and fiery start! Got me hooked up! š„š„š„
so much love for this first chapterš§”š§”š§”
I love this book... keep it up Loveš
Meeen,am getting to love this authoress
It's a five star 1st chapter
If someone stare at me... I will feel weird tooš«š£ Hooking Chapter .
I think the first chapter brought in a lot of unique characters. I especially liked his body guard and Melody!
Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading
Wow, that was really interesting. It's a completely different world view.
thanks for the chapter!!
This is a fun read. I like that the king taught those mean men a lesson. The prince just needs some confidence. you did a great job with showing his emotions.
I really like Melody's point of view... What does our main character look like?
Oh the start was so good[img=recommend]
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Wow! A very interesting start. The story sure gave me an enjoyable read...... š
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Interesting, well written, captures attention and keeps it. what more could you ask for in a book? lol this was good.
Very interesting and intriguing first chapter. Can't wait to read more.