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Comments of chapter undefined of Forging Empires and the Utopia

Uchicha_Remant
Uchicha_RemantLv5Uchicha_Remant

You should continue writing this and Create new one too.

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Kyle_4252
Kyle_4252Lv4Kyle_4252

you can rewrite start it in like the year 2000 or somethin also the system no superpower stuff like magic but make it so he can become very strong or very intelligent so he can atleast make his own Ai thingy like jarvis that way he can create many companies not just entertain English is not my first language sorry

Dark_Life_1
Dark_Life_1Lv4Dark_Life_1

you can rewrite it better and system can base to superpowers and his life.

omnigodvoldigoad
omnigodvoldigoadLv3omnigodvoldigoad

I'm say continue writing

Iyoten_kita_jan
Iyoten_kita_janLv2Iyoten_kita_jan

Why would it have to be Hollywood? Like why not try to do it in a communist country, for example Hungary or east Germany man, Soviet union also produced good movies for it's time

txy_
txy_Lv4txy_

do what you think is the best

Navasu_69
Navasu_69Lv4Navasu_69

If you think you can improve the story more by rewriting than by following the current trajectory, do it, I'll read it until you decide not to release more chapters.

Tykevious_Draughn
Tykevious_DraughnLv13Tykevious_Draughn

I'm excited to see the new direction you take

Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15Wilder6

Keep going, great story

Shaka_De_Virgo
Shaka_De_VirgoLv3Shaka_De_Virgo

I vote for the rewrite but the sister's personality should be kept, xD

Allblack
AllblackLv1Allblack

kkkkkkk I thought the web novel was buggy because I started reading this work again from where I left off.

Daoist_Empereur
Daoist_EmpereurLv14Daoist_Empereur

I think it will be good too if like in the 200 chapter the system upgrade and he can go in the universe that he create but you can also give him the power of the world he create and do like the storie debut in the years 2000 chapters and like in 2020 mana awakening and they are dungeons and the reason he was transgrimated is to help the world whith his story and so the world having more imagination and if he was not there the world was dead beaucause people don’t think how to use there powers

Hectic_Falcon
Hectic_FalconLv4Hectic_Falcon

rewrite it but also keep some of the elements of the original

Sovannra_Seang
Sovannra_SeangLv4Sovannra_Seang

rewrite it cause idk what is going on in this book now it's about confusing

Aleris_Legna
Aleris_LegnaLv4Aleris_Legna

I think creative freedom is what would work here I like the story but if it’s hard to write consistently for doing research then it’s time to drop it even though that kinda bums me out but hey that’s life hope to see the new or this fanfic😁

Mano_Shika
Mano_ShikaLv1Mano_Shika

Whatever you want, I just hope it doesn't involve anything supernatural, a system that elevates skills/knowledge according to people's feelings and fame would be interesting. I wish all the best for you

PleasureDemonDrak
PleasureDemonDrakLv12PleasureDemonDrak

rewrite it if you think you can do better but if you do save up chapts just in case you want to change something before you post it

daniel_rahn
daniel_rahnLv2daniel_rahn

idk do what you think is better