Student_Of_Culture
the guy wants to turn nazarick into the justice league, save everyone and kill everyone who is evil. the reason the overlord is so interesting is exactly because it is one of the few stories in which the main characters are the villains, if you take that away, it takes away 80% of the essence of the story...
There's nothing left in this fanfic that's make me like Overlord anymore and I don't like the writing style of this fanfic either, it doesn't make me feel any emotions, all characters feels lifeless, there's no character interactions, no actions, no story telling, this fanfic is like a void and is plain boring.
WHY???!!! Overlord is about Momonga and the subjects of Nazarick!!! If you remove Momonga this will end not being Overlord anymore! I realy dont know why the fics of Overlord I think that can be good have the sudden urge to remove Momonga from the history... I dont know about other readers but this breaks the immersion for me If you want to make a verlord fic Momonga has to be there As i said Overlord without Momonga does not exist Obs: This is my opinion! If you disagree that's ok for međ every one thinks differently Ah! And i dont speak english if i wrote something wrong that's why
I'd make a few different NPC's that could cover a "new" floor on Nazarick. I'd make one based off an aquatic species, a flying species (phoenix, etc.), beast species (lion, tiger, bear, etc.), maybe a witch or grand sorcerer/sorceress, some production types (pharmacists, cooks/bakers, carpentry/architecture, etc.) I'd make sure that all possible bases are covered and jobs are delegated to where you don't have to worry about it since they're all max loyalty to you.