DreamThree
With the MC not copying songs from our universe, its impossible to relate and feel the hype of incredible songs amazing the characters listening. It ends up feeling a little dull but not in a bad way. I have yet to decide for me if its great but at least its different. it would be way easier to imagine with acting and directing later on though
This is about Hollywood, right? Then it is already a fanfiction in some sense. Are you gonna change the name of all famous artists and groups? Symphony is supposed to be Fifth Harmoney, right? I don't think you should change the names of groups in the story. Half the entertainment from these types of novels comes from the anticipation of the songs sung, and how someone new will interact with famous stars we already see on the tv. You already took out the music part by doing original songs and movies, so if you also change Robert Downy Jr and the Avengers movie into something like 'Rob Sowny Jr' and 'The Revengers', then this novel won't make it very far. Maybe, a couple of months at most until you run out of ideas and are forced to start a new novel to keep your fanbase going.
Yeah I canât continue reading this storyâŚ.. Itâs good but the origina song idea is awful and I just canât read the âsongsâ when I have no idea what Iâm reading. No tune and have no idea when there are pauses in between words⌠nice story but poor execution. Also, the white light is another thing I think is a pointless for forced thing but that wouldnt make me drop the story but the lyrics did⌠I wish you goodluck