Comments of chapter undefined of Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood

these original songs make me want to shoot myself

With the MC not copying songs from our universe, its impossible to relate and feel the hype of incredible songs amazing the characters listening. It ends up feeling a little dull but not in a bad way. I have yet to decide for me if its great but at least its different. it would be way easier to imagine with acting and directing later on though

well some part of song are really good but some parts....... umm weird , I guess.

Author in my great opinion... This song you wrote simply has good meaning, but I CAN"T simply enjoy it when I read it, without hearING it... you know like you should SiNg iT... get me? pls~

Not sure why people even trying to comprehend the sound of original songs in a freaking writing. For me, as long as they rhyme and the lyrics have a somewhat deep meaning, it's wonderful.

thank you

tftc~~~○●

man I actually love this lyrics it almost make me cry

God! it's so mesmerizing

Thanks for the chapter

See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car

this white and silver thing . I think this is familiar . haha

This is about Hollywood, right? Then it is already a fanfiction in some sense. Are you gonna change the name of all famous artists and groups? Symphony is supposed to be Fifth Harmoney, right? I don't think you should change the names of groups in the story. Half the entertainment from these types of novels comes from the anticipation of the songs sung, and how someone new will interact with famous stars we already see on the tv. You already took out the music part by doing original songs and movies, so if you also change Robert Downy Jr and the Avengers movie into something like 'Rob Sowny Jr' and 'The Revengers', then this novel won't make it very far. Maybe, a couple of months at most until you run out of ideas and are forced to start a new novel to keep your fanbase going.

Yeah I can’t continue reading this story….. It’s good but the origina song idea is awful and I just can’t read the “songs” when I have no idea what I’m reading. No tune and have no idea when there are pauses in between words… nice story but poor execution. Also, the white light is another thing I think is a pointless for forced thing but that wouldnt make me drop the story but the lyrics did… I wish you goodluck

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excellent song great work thanks for the chapter and keep up the great work 😁👍

so why he dont patent his song ?he knew people can steal it right? is the author that is ignorant or the mc ?

Excelente historia, sigue adelante con ella,...

Thank you, it was well written as always😁 Great job!