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Comments of chapter undefined of Abyss of Dual Cultivation: Goddess's Lust system

Lord_Poseidon
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C'mon fix the grammar. "The Abyss tower" -> The Abyss Tower "Silver hair turned blue" -> so at the start is not blue hair and no need to cap the color "The heavenly punishment" -> The Heavenly Punishment "The abyss" -> The Abyss (make up your mind to switch Abyss or abyss) "The warmth of a goddess" -> The wrath of a goddess (anger right) "She has been let in here" -> She has been left in here

tatsuya277353
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Ough I hope she's not some pathetic mc I have I hope for her!!!!!!!!!

daygon_yuuki
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OhAri
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How mamy womem is n the haram ?

Arturo_M_1345
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RogueCrescent
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Thanks for the chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SocialHippo
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Otter_Batch
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Shira_ori
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Nice first chapter!