Comments of chapter undefined of Re:write The Authors Transmigration

Umm...Author, sorry if i come out as rude but could you start using ? ! , . etc? ? if not, then i don't think i can continue to read this book.

I am so lost. Why were there people screaming, did others get drawn there as well?

Thx for the chapter

The story is off to a great start... loving it ^^

it is an interesting system

The story itself is good/ interesting, but the sentence structure could be improved. The wording can be a little repetitive and confusing, and at times the sentences are excessively complex. I still definitely think it’s worth reading and I’m looking forward to what comes next :)

Thanks for the chapter

Confusing. You should try to add more punctuation and use proper grammar, or else the sentences are blended together