Comments of chapter undefined of The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

This felt like him taking a step back as a character and becoming more of a joke. He doesn't even fight smart in this area just turning into a dumb brute for no apparent reason besides a forced plot thread. Why not just shut down the cyborg first? He does it after punching a hole in them and showing off his strength despite all his caution to not show he had powers where tf did that go? He yells before going in to sneak attack and just overall the whole scene is spitting in the face of all of the recent training he's had, showing he's lost character development.

hmm, that felt kinda forced ngl

Since when did he become so undisciplined. I hope this was just his imagination if he failed to remember his lessons. Would've still liked seeing a dead mind rapist. Thanks for the chapter

this story is getting tasteless

Of course, the author is visible, but this is very stupid, our hero is stupid, naive, good-natured like Batman, only sometimes killing but dumber than him

That was dissapointing

This sounds the kind of thing he avoids. He could have had his blackmail and he would've got protection for himself and his mentors/friends. Also I get he has anger issues but this is insane.

Okay, we knew that MC has issue with self control, but did he ever get affected by some sort of mind control/brain washing, which means that it triggers him more? I do not recall such a thing.

As much as I like Gray, I hate to say it but he proves the point that poor self control can lead to unfavourable situations or one's undoing despite having multiple special abilities

nah this chapter isn't it. he had his emotions in check and merely talking about his mentors wouldn't set him off so impulsively. it's not my fic so I can't really complain about the authors vision but this is a turn off. if the author had to force a fight for his plot he could have had the MC caught sneaking out by nightshade or deadshot or someone rather than him rushing out in a fit of rage

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Forzado, e idiota

suck

That was...disappointing.

Fix this chapter it's just trashy and his teacher will be so disappointed all those lessons they had were wasted on a fool who can't even control his anger issues

doesn't he have bombs or something.

This seems extremely forced...

as much as i love the author this arc has been very long and Boring and this chap was just not it