Comments of chapter undefined of Hollywood King

More coreografic fights if you start making the 4 5 and 6. George lucas couldn't do what he did in 2001 with obi-wan and qui-gon vs darth maul. The movies were a delight but the fights where 2 man with a glowing stick poking at each other haha.

Make the lightsaber lore-accurate, they should be able to cut through virtually any material. There should be more dismemberments and property damage with laser sword cutting through everything not some scratch marks

Personally I think the first movie is near Perfect. the only thing to fix would be the Obi-Wan vs Darth Vader fight. It could use better choreography and Force pushes mixed into the fight. Maybe add the Biggs Darklighter scenes to the movie, regardless of the pacing. For other movies I would argue setting up "Heir to the Empire" as the 4th movie to the OG movies(A tetralogy). Where Han and Leia have babies, Luke meets Mara Jade, and Admiral Thrawn is the enemy. This way after the original movies you can do the "Prequels" and then come back and make a true sequel with the kids of Han, Leia, Luke, and Mara Jade facing the remnants of the Empire controlled by Admiral Thrawn.

thanks for the chapters

A Storm Trooper that could actualy shoot without missing would be nice. But then again... there won't be much memes about them Kekw.

Use real world events and historical inspiration to build up the sequel trilogy and use Legends as a base to build up more lore and worldbuilding. Keep the original and prequel trilogy mostly the same albeit with minor and moderate changes like no jar jar binks, cringy lines, and Padme being 5 years older than Anakin. Also hire linguists and conlangers to help create different in universe languages.

thanks for info but can take down this chapter