Comments of chapter undefined of Talent Swallowing System

Lost interest in the beginning .....too confusing man

Context would help It’s like you skipped parts of the story How did Toby get here, why is he so strong and why the change of name Also where is here why is it important so many unanswered questions is like you expect us to read your mind and already know the answers

Note to author: you should first establish the identity of the characters huhu

Rescuing a girl already. New record?

The problem with all of this and how this story has started out is that you just time skipped over EVERYTHING that people want to read about.....

have to already feeling like hes a fake op mc. if he was really op then there would be no need to sneak around no need for others and he could easily take down all those involved and we could then focus on him exploring the world

confused as f...

what is even happening?

Man, it's too confusing to the point that I re-read the 1st and 2nd chapter but still couldn't get. It's totally messed up

better ✨

Good!

Does the body shake? Man I hate it when y'all describe emotions like that, Mano no one shakes the body Man tnc

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Beta mc.... I know that story