should have led with his dragons breath

you did a good job with her description. why ruin that with this comment.

you dont need to make comparisons. we can use our own imagination. when you do the comparisons its kinda cringe to be honest.

That's not much....

@Author, do you have another site to read your books on? webnovel is a disappointment.

He not She

He not She

his not her

he not she

go through all chapters and fix the characters gender.....

jesus, stop repeating yourself.

i feel like you are constantly repeating yourself.

sighs

story starts out well, but then skips at the end. not worth the time to read .

I agree. I feel like it's going to be a constant recap.

First, the book has potential and i do like it. But i found myself rolling my eyes in frustration over the overly long explanation about the weapons. MC is supposed to be a genius.

So this just ruined the flow..... gonna find another book to read.

faint wings. hidden wings, invisible wings. which is it?

mc is a man or women? Can't tell anymore

wheres the report button