ApexPen
it's almost always a woman who kills the MC and this silent emotion of hers is going to change something in this timeline or is it just a random line
Been a while since I was so darn impressed by a first chapter and fangirling over the (so far) cool MC, at the same time keeping the tone mature and not cringy, with a cohesive setting of a goal (albeit cliche, but nothing wrong with it if it's done well like this one) without boring the reader to death, nicely done Author. I've also got to add, superb grammar and writing, flows really well. Thanks for the chapter, it got me really excited to keep reading!