Comments of chapter undefined of Titan Rising Online: World Breaker

You got a good story going for you but my guy, get an editor or something, the amount of errors makes this hard to read especially the constant name changing. It's a good story don't get me wrong, but you gotta go back and fix your mistakes.

This story has so much potential, but it needs a good amount of editing to fix the errors so readers don't constantly get thrown off the flow of the story. If the author ever gets it together enough to polish up this gem, it will be brilliant.

I can appreciate the author commenting on the issues, but these chapters have been out for months from the look of it. I mean, any general reading of this novel would show that the initial sporadic mistakes sharply increased around chapter 20 or so and have gotten to the point that nearly every paragraph has issues.

you should definitely proofread better. you have made so many mistakes in your series so far. I would enjoy it more, if only you fixed those many stupid mistakes.

TFTC