Love the banter honestiy

Time for a war

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same, here, had a couple notifications there are new chapters but cant find any, anywhere. only thing I see is "the mighty author is building up a stockpile" thingy in the chapter list

ah yes, the mythical medieval shower, must be some devil magic, the guard captain is some heretic devil worshipper for sure

In the chapter she came out of the evolution pod there was a description of her appearance, pretty sure the title has "ghost" in it

great to see some new chapters, thanks for the upload

Thanks for the chapter, I love all the side characters' stories

you really should make up your mind on whether to write the whole fight in past tense or present tense, switching every other paragraph is quite jarring

with every paragraph you're losing me more and more, just develop the plot instead of writing pure stupidity...

this has to be the worst word salad I've ever had, and I've had lots

thanks for the new chapters

There seem to be less and less typos and grammatical mistakes since the last chapter I commented on, so I think I'll stick with it and hope for more improvement until It all gets ironed out. When it comes to the story it's very enjoyable, if a bit too fast-paced in some parts. The MC has some depth already and the world-building feels unique, definitely has potential and I can't wait to see where it goes from here

Thanks for the chapter

Checked back in today, It's in the author note now, nice

love to see a new chapter. what's the discord link?

I wonder where he'll get to, weak peak TP or average peak TP, getting to a strong peak true path beast would be a bit unbalancedso I think he won't defeat it at this point but it would be nice to see him try to fight it at least

I would say the amount of matter and energy, the "mass of energy" sounds a bit weird. Also considering you convert energy into mass here, mentioning energy seems redundant

I feel like the training arc was a bit too long, maybe 2-4 chapters too long, some things were a bit repetetive/redundant imo, but I'm happy to see that Shang finally figured out the moral hurdle that was plaguing him. It's not the way I would've liked it to turn out as Shang seems a bit too inhuman to really immerse myself in his character, but I'll enjoy it nonetheless. Anyway I'm glad it's over and we can get on with plot and see the rise of the Swordwhirlwind Kingdom haha

The only crime here is what I did to your mom Oooo