Comments of chapter undefined of Allure Of The Night

Omg she actually said it!!! I hate that he doesn’t know that she’s the mermaid he’s been looking for. Please tell her you have feeling too Vincent!!! Then kiss the girl!

"Don't...I think I am falling for you." EVE FINALLY ADMITTED!!! 🤍🙉🙌🏻 I feel the rainbows burst out from my chest!! Can you two just kiss already!!??! 🙈🙈🙈 These two will be the death of me and Ashi will be the responsible one to order my casket!!! 💀⚰️ Thank you for the chappie AAAAAA 💎

I died a little bit on this chapter …. This is torture, who agrees with me? I can’t help but fall in love deeper with this two… the sexual tension is too much to handle … Let’s scream y’all while dying waiting for the next chapter … Ash should be arrested for doing this to us 🤣😅🤣😂 We love you dear author 💚💚💚 You are the best 🥰🥰🥰

Aaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Vincent you gotta stop playing around!!! How will Vince react now?! Poor Eve trying to keep her feelings in check because Vince is not giving her much reassurance.. Omggg the sexual tension is too muuuuch!!! 🔥 Thanks for the awesome chapters Ash!!! 🥰

It’s official!! That last line….. finally! 🥰 Even thought there was no ‘action’ but reading these two chapters got me so hot I needed a cold shower! 🥵 Honestly! Haven’t read such a wonderful well paced story in recent times!!! Makes me all giddy ☺️ Cant wait for more!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

The last sentence of this chapter 🥺 why does it feel so bittersweet 😭 OMG how would Vince react?! Please don't push her away again. Eve's heart is precious 💔 These two chapters are such a tease >.< I'm freaking out AHHH

OH.MY.GOOOOOOD...... That was unexpected I should say. Oh dear Ash you made my day with the last sentence slipped out of Eve's tongue. I doubt anybody else's heart is drumming louder than mine at the moment of her confession, not even Eve's. At the same time I'm sure that eerie silence is the only thing coming from Vince's heart as it stopped beating for the moment, before regaining his teasing self. Oh my lord, How I hope that he will pull her into an extremely deep kiss pouring out all his emotions instead of mere words for her to understand, so does himself which he is obviously oblivious of. Kiss Kiss Kiss

O..M..G ASH!!! this might just be one of the worse cliff hangers you have ever done!!!! I hope you're satisfied with our suffering...

The ENDING...😩 I just hope you will not turn down Eve, Master Vincent. we'll have to wait for your answer thou to Eve's confession til tomorrow; or can we wish for it to come sooner than tomorrow, PLEASE??? 🥺 You've got to know that Eve has been that girl you were looking for after that day in Crowbury at the marketplace. 😥

I love that Eve has spoken her mind. I think it will force Vince to really think about how he feels as well, and all the games he plays. I have absolutely no idea how he will respond, though. Also, this is definitely torture, but I still can't get enough of it...

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!! These chapters were perfect ❤️ she confessed!!!! I truly hope Vincent will have the suit able response to that 🤞🏽

I am glad that she voiced this out loud.I am hoping he is just as genuine in expressing his feelings and not too sparky to her. I cannot wait for when he finds out that she is the one he has been looking for all these years.

thank you for the chapter ! omg this is the moment we have been waiting for !

Excuse me while I cry a river! That was a horrible heart wrenching / wonderful heart warming cliffhanger! Wow, Ash, did you really have to get all of us excited, lead us to a cliff to bungee jump and used regular rope to leave us hanging! I know I will not get any sleep until the next update! Please update as soon as you possibly can! 🙏🏼 Eve, you admitted you feelings to Vincent! Even though I am sure you had your reservations about admitting them to him you still did! I am sure you did it in hopes he will leave you alone but something tells me it will make him more drawn to you! I am guessing he is going to hurt your feelings 1st due to the shock of it! Vincent, Eve has admitted that she is falling for you! Please don’t make any snide remarks to her! Something tells me you are going to freak out and get scared of your returned feelings for her! It will make you run! I am positive you will mess it up and then realize she is your little mermaid! It will take a lot to earn her trust and affection again! Don’t be a dope! Ash, this was totally unexpected! I would have never guessed Eve would break 1st! Is Vincent going to hurt her feelings? Wow! This was so good and excellently written! My heart is still palpitating and I still have butterflies! Thank you for making me feeling emotions I usually try to hide!

OmG she admitted her feeling, how will he react? argh I need more 😣 enjoy your week-end Ash

Yessss!!!!! But NOOOOOO to the cliffhanger!!!!

I need more!!! Vince you had better crack here and now!

I have been in meetings all afternoon and have had to sneak in a few paragraphs at a time to find out what happened with our Eve and Vincent today… I couldn’t do my normal comments to react as I read through or I would have been busted for not being 100% focused on my work 🙈 Ash! Look what you are doing to me?! 🤣🤣. Now that the meetings are over, I need to re-read a few times to pick up on everything i glossed over while hiding my phone in the meetings 🤣