Comments of chapter undefined of Allure Of The Night

I am so f!@#$^ disappointed at Marceline. She so disrespectful to her mother who gave birth two beautiful children, showering with love and support, being there for them, and understanding their needs. And this is what Katherina-after-death received from Marceline? How dare she. She doesn't deserve a mother at all. I'm even more disappointed at Eduard for not teaching her some discipline. Worst. Daughter. Ever. I rather like Grace Quinn (YMDP) who can show her real self to take a abusive punch than dealing this Marceline Moriarty's two-face, dramatic insolence, and I-hate-my-mother-because-shes-human a spoilt brat B!+@h. 😤🤬 A slap by Vincent is a great satisfaction.

Loved the character development✨💫 From the way the characters process the traumatic experience and how they deal with it; whether it was being ignorant or blaming others or falling deeper into the darkness. It was written really well! It truely shows the characters are the way they are, like in their beliefs, attitudes and perspective of the world. Now, I wonder what Eve will do after knowing this info...🤔

Thank you Ash for another great story. 😘😘😘 Your storyline grips your readers imagination that I always look forward for the next chapter.

Amazing character development. I almost wanted to feel bad for Marcie- almost. Our poor Vincent.

At least Vincent only slapped Marceline and didn’t rip out her fangs,,,

Oh my broken heart! Vincent buried his kindness! He decided he would never be kind again because his mother was kind and she was killed! Even though his mother wanted him to be kinder and sweeter than she was, he decided to do the opposite! This is how Vincent dealt with his mother’s death! And then my anger surges! Marceline has the nerve to disrespect the women who gave her life and showered her with love and affection! She hated her mother because she was a human and she blamed her for what they went through and for Max’s death! It was easier for her to pass the blame to humans and her mother than take any of the responsibility on to herself! Lastly, my mind was filled with jubilee and laughter escaped my lips as I saw the word SLAP! I was very excited that a twelve year old Vincent put a spoiled Marceline in her place! I also agreed with Vincent! Marceline’s shenanigan’s are the reason why Mrs. Moriarty was taken and killed! I am guessing this is why Vincent and Marceline’s relationship is so estranged! So this explains why Marceline adores Annalise! She is such a horrible daughter! This is a great example of spoiled rotten! Ash, wow, this was so good! I never imagined it would go in this direction! Vincent the enforcer at 12! I love it! Thank you! Again you leave me shocked! I was like 👇🏼

I think this is why Sr Moriarty married a strong willed vampire to be the “ mother “ to the kids

Vince went hardcore on a sister! I agree she was being spoiled and what he said about her disparaging their mother was true but dang, she’s hurting and has no idea how to process. But I guess the same can be said of him as well...Those Anderson’s are off the chain though, blaming a little girl instead of the heinous people who committed the crime. We can what if things to death. What if they had done their parental duty and refused to let their don take Marcie home? However, this sheds some light too on another reason Marcie might like Noah. The whole situation is a cluster. Vince now thinks being nice and thinking of others is bad and has decided to be the polar opposite. Marcie thinks humans are weak and should be hated and ignored. Smh

I’m still shocked that their mother was human. Oh Marceline…she hasn’t learned to take responsibility. Yes the trauma affected her and it sounds like she was a class *itch before the kidnap.

If only that one slap were enough to bring Marcie back to the light 😔 Been a long road of hard lessons for her, and it'll be even longer if she continues her little games.

Vincent surprised me while Marceline disappointed me. His affection for his little sister is evident, at the same time he cannot stand by just like father and let her be. Their mother who was the kindest and sacrificed her life for her kids and others was disrespected and humiliated by her own child posthumously just because she chose to remain a human. Her soul might be hurting. Vincent's love for his mother is boundless. I doubt that Marceline is unable to accept or overcome her mother's loss which she chose to direct it in the form of hatred and rage with humiliations thrown at her mother. I believe there will come a day when she will realise what she's doing and why, a day when she will breakdown, and will let go of every pain, hatred, grievance and all the other chains that are holding her back. I hope someone will come to help her and find herself from the abyss she let herself fall into.

I proud of vince stand up for his mom to Marcy she deserve the slap

As always Author Ash the story is so well written. Thank you

Marceline is a brat and i dont blame vincent for slapping her or for is dislike of her in current time.

Marcy is a brat

Can’t wait for more chapters! Loving the book 💙

I now understand, why Vincent don’t care too much for Marceline and Marcy’s aspiration to be like her stepmother. She sees rudeness and bad manners as strength. I doubt, Annalise will lay down her life to save her own daughter, like Vincent mother did, not only for her children but for others also. Brilliant well written storyline, Ash. Katharina, you deserve a golden ticket.

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