Comments of chapter undefined of Allure Of The Night

Man she tried to save this little idiot and now the bigger idiot is going to spew the details to her handler 😬

Eve see what you’ve done? Tsk. And you freely gave your name to her. Vincent will have more cleaning up to do. 🫠 Sometimes you gotta learn when to step back as to not bring trouble to yourself. Life is unfair as it is.

Now I am concerned! Eve, what trouble have you swam into this time! Isla is now telling older mermaid that she met you! Thankfully she does not believe her yet, but I am sure it is just a matter of time! All these captive mermaids are soon going to envy you and they will soon begin narking you out to their captives! Sure you have Vince to protect you, but he cannot be there all the time! Vince, what reason do you have for helping Eve? I still want to say that your mother was possibly in the mermaid family! If not your mother, you are still trying to find the little girl you met when you were a boy! I am not sure, but you have a soft spot for mermaids! I see Eve being captured at some point. I am wondering if she will be put up for auction and bought by her mother’s killer? Ash, wow! Really, what a crazy turn of events! These chapters were so good! Thank you so much for sharing your talent! Waiting on next update like 👇🏼

I feel like there is going to be a lot of trouble for Eve. I believe that the older one is going to say something and hopefully Vincent will there to save and protect our dear Eve.

seeing this i see Vince was right. now she will be in trouble again just becuz she offered help. i'm glad she has Vince on her side but what if Marceline or murderer hears about this

Bless Eve’s heart, just a trouble magnet. Who knows how her offering help is going to turn out now, smh. Vince has his work cut out for him holding on to his lunch, lol.

And here we go…

I don't even want to think about how easily Eve can be found now. All the young mermaid has to say is her name (which Eve freely shared) and a description of Vincent (who seems to be pretty unique in his looks). Hopefully no one believes that a mermaid can change to have legs and they assume that the older mermaid is telling lies if she tries to say anything. Although, I'm not really sure what benefit the older mermaid would get by ratting out a fellow mermaid. 🤔😳

Ugh, what a silly way for her to get caught. Eve is so naive it’s a bit frustrating. You’d think that with all she’s been through she’d be a bit more world wise.

So much brilliance in this writing!! I am glad vincent didn’t give his name. Maybe this will buy some time and mystery before the word gets out. 🤞😓

that older mermaid would impose a threat on Eve's life. I just hope Vincent would be around there smh should that happen on Eve.

I’m on lunch… the highlight of my day because there are always a couple chapters waiting for me and it’s my excitement at work 🤣 I’ve been checking like a crack head and the time is ticking by LOL. Praying for some chapies!! 🥳🥳🥳

Vince has really become a super hero since he met Eve! Eve’s In-Vince-able Vampire. She would certainly have a shortened life without him! 😬

Now there's another mermaid and older. I wish Eve could just stay quiet and mind her own business. 😕 It's ok to be helpful but sometimes she needs to turn a blind eye and keep herself away from any trouble. She can't have Vincent coming to the rescue all the time. 🤦🏻‍♀️

So true, not everyone wants to be rescued

What’s that saying “A good deed never goes unpunished” smh 🤦‍♀️ why did she say her name? Poor thing, she’s a full time job 🤣🤣

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I swear Eve is the real trouble magnet 🤦🏽‍♀️ I'm upset!!!! What a snitch!!! Jeez! 😡