H2Oz_Anxious
was good up till here, its just turning out to be a beginning after the end rip off, like why. its not only cliche like the title says but its a bad cliche that just ruins it. unfortunate it went down the predictable route of forcing conflict and likely going to replace any hard work or talent he has with plot armour.
I'm not dogging on the story aswell as any clichés but I felt like the delivery on it was a little lackluster. not to say it was boring and yes I knew in advance with the synopsis but how everything went down it felt as if the moment was kinda whatever and it wasn't all that emotional. still enjoying the story just wanted to share my take on the climactic moment. thanks!
I’m mostly wondering why the dad doesn’t seem to have improved in what must be around 10 years. From the flashbacks he was a tier 5 and he seems to still be a tier 5 mage. Is it really that hard to progress in this world? He seems talented, would have thought he could have made it to 6/7 by now in which case this fight would have been easy. Also the fight with the demon seemed lacklustre, but the plot needs to move on so let’s see where it goes from here.