H2Oz_Anxious
The story is okay so far, but umm... if you accept constructive criticism, maybe level up your vocabulary? You use the word 'gentle' to describe almost everything in this first chapter, Author-sama. And likening something to be like background music only worked well the first time. I don't know if this is the case, but if English isn't your first language, don't worry, you can still look up synonyms and such online. I'm looking forward to read your story though! Keep at it!
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So, I like how this chapter came out. The main character had lost their parents at a young age, so they didn't know what it was like to have parents, and now that they've reincarnated, they have one of the things they'd been missing their entire life, and they're happy about it. I honestly like it. Nice beginning to this đ