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Richard_Forrest1mthCommentedFourth wall? Never heard of it lol
Fate's paranoid nature kicked into super overdrive. If she knows my name then that could only mean I'm in that web novel.- Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
Okay, that's a funny way to look at it lol
That's right modern worlds have Truck-kun while medieval worlds. Have his evil cousin Horse-Kun the terror of dirt roads everywhere. - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
That's how truck-kun gets ya. He sends you a video game you never ordered and you think nothing of it lol
"It was that dam video game Final Countdown. Who names their game something like that? I should have been more paranoid when that game showed up at my door. I never ordered a game called Final Countdown. But just thought Mom or Dad got it as a gift for me." - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
More iconic words have never been spoken lol
"Oh Shit!!" - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
Better safe than sorry, given the information we have
Fate escaped his therapist's office that day. Like he always does by getting a helicopter ride back home. - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
Okay, that does make it more concerning though lol
"Can you tell me why every single car in your parking lot is a Truck then? Also, why are all of the trucks running and you can't even see who is driving?" - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
I like how you frame it like a stalker situation. That works for comedic effect lol
That's right the number of Truck related accidents around Fate. Has climbed to a shocking number. So being the paranoid man that Fate is he saw that Truck-kun is after him. - Richard_Forrest1mthCommented
I like how you delved a bit into his past. Always a good way to learn more about characters. Also, berries leveling him up was a pretty good way to do it. I'm wondering if he levels up from eating anything, or just berries though? I'm sure something else has to do it more since you made it pretty clear the effect lessens the more he eats. Either way, nice chapter
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So far, this is entertaining. I got laughs at the humor, such as not being sure if Jake chanted the right word lol
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BoobMonster : hey hey hey, where the ecchi scenes? - Richard_Forrest2mthCommented
This also makes sense actually. If a concept is overused, which usually happens due to it being popular in the first place, it becomes a cliché, and a lot of people loathe clichés
And though I did exactly as my readers asked, apart from the first novel, I never found my books making it in the rankings. - Richard_Forrest2mthCommented
What's popular does get the attention (and if you're doing it for money, then also the money) that you need, but then you're just doing what other people want, not what you want. And not doing something the way you want to can completely ruin the hobby for you. That's why my advice is always write what you want. Sure, it might not get you much attention, but you'll at least still be having fun while you're doing it. And you'll still find a fanbase overtime, albeit a bit more slowly
It was not because I hated writing. No, it was simply because of what I was made to write. Because I was catering to my readers, I slowly started straying away from what I truly liked writing. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
Hopefully, The Creator starts writing a story about that for your protagonist to read after this one finishes then! (in universe, I mean. This isn't me calling you out to do so lol)
As for the names of the months, they were named after the 12 heroes who fought against the demon invasion at the end of the second epoch. But that's another story, one I am not entirely aware of. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
I like how you actually already know this stuff (or I'm assuming at least. It is your story after all lol), and yet you have the answers include the uncertainty of the protagonist if there is any, because they're his answers, not yours. That's a nice touch
A: I have a hypothesis, but I am not certain about this. Itâs most likely because there were 12 powers so strong that others could barely challenge them. Moreover, even if the holder of one of the 12 ancient powers dies, a new one will take his/her place when the necessity arrives. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
Well you didn't have to lie lol
Map of Shrankor in this paragraph comment. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
Guess that cut mark is where the name "Scar" came from
But my head felt dizzy again the moment I saw the face reflecting in the mirror. The face that showed up in the mirror was not mine, though it had some faint resemblance to my late teenage self. It was far more handsome. Be it the flamboyant scarlet hair or the distant scarlet pupil that was almost alien to me. There was a mark on the right eyebrow all the way to the end of the forehead. A cut mark from a knife, maybe. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
Said it before, and I'll say it again, if you're really passionate about something, you can talk about it nonstop for hours. If you write something great enough, I can definitely believe someone would answer that many questions about it lol
"This is the creator of Forbidden Realms." My heart skipped a beat just as I heard the hoarse voice. The voice continued, "You are the only one who answered all the questions." - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
Given this story is concluded, I'm assuming readers of your Web Novel have the satisfaction this main character wanted from Forbidden Realms
'Honestly, I did not want this story to end. It has been with me for quite some time now, and I like it as much as my own life. But every story needs a happy ending, or a conclusion of sorts. Honestly, I don't know how far I'll go, but if I did not read the conclusion of the story, I would always feel like something was missing and feel empty.' - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
When you're passionate about something you enjoy, you can definitely talk about it nonstop for hours, I'm sure we all can agree lol
I praised the author for creating such a fantastic fantasy world with vibrant characters and cursed at him for killing Ciara and Yeriel. I told him to limit the suffering of Scar and Edward, and when I finally stopped, I had already written quite a few paragraphs. - Richard_Forrest3mthCommented
I like how, despite giving reasons for it not being cheating, the main character still slipped up and called it cheating. That's funny đđđ
The questions about the world's details were the hardest to answer, though, by cheating, ahem! I mean, fact checking, I answered them all. I will say it again: This is not a test.