Comments of chapter undefined of The Homeless Mage

A somewhat interesting chapter, though I still have no idea from neither this chapter nor the synopsis what this story will be about. Also, I know English isn't your first language, but you should really try to find a proofreader to read through this for you. There are way too many mistakes and places where it needs to be rephrased. Still though, a good first attempt! Congrats on your first chapter!

hopefully

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