Comments of chapter undefined of Amarillo's Pirate Adventure (One Piece SI)

Nah man, I am out. Imagine starting at 0...then you get +10( the traits) and then -20( negative traits) all in all, you are worse off then before.....bruh. Like, If you give him These negative traits...you might as well give you nothing. Brave.......but is scared of basically rooms fast Learner, but will probably Kill himself by falling off a cliff Lucky...but is a slave to a woman he doesn't know.... like, what am I supposed to find good in this Story if I don't like a Mc like, for example, Coby...

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im out at slave

so this is one of those story that make the MC suffer in every chapter because the author want the world to burn

I think you gave him too many disadvantages.

Pretty disappointing reincarnation, it would have been better if the mc was already shown as a baby in one piece universe without all these useless traits.

slave really the negative trait i can understand but slave

hahaha good start 😂, but I hope the negative traits are not so severe or that he can control them to some extent, otherwise it would be quite boring to see the guy getting hit all the time 😑. (Google translator)

i don't know what to feel about this

Braaaahhhh if he finds this girl and try to kill her and she says “pls don’t kill/hurt me!” He’s done for

This was not thought out well at all i can say that for sure.

So, I of course drop this. This is obviously a torture fanfic. Created by Masochist, Sadist or both. The Slave thing is just way too disturbing. If I were him, when I would meet her, I would hope, she isn't smart enough to not allow me to kill myself and then kill myself. Even if she were the kindest Women in the World, she could only live far away from me. And there's no way to turn this thing into a wholesome relationship either. It will always be unequel. This so disturbing that it brought me to write a comment. I rarely do so.

I will drop the story here All those conditions are just erasing my enjoyment🥲 But still good luck with the story 👍

I don’ think I’ve read a worst first chapter in a long time.

imagine the women is Big Mom

Had a chance to be good but you ruined it by adding that trash

Dude I'm Out....Dropped.

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