ElderKwon
Actually, in the series, Cersei tried for Joffrey to not kill Ned so they don't start a war with the Starks. I know her character is not likable, but you made her too stupid. Cersei was creative and loved power, she made mistakes, but she also did very smart decisions with the cards she was handled. She even weaponized her womanhood and was willing to sacrifice anything for power, even Jaime.
Bro what about his magic? Been ages since he used magic to cause chaos. Also I think the number of the armies from other kingdom are kinda exaggerated. I mean even after so many trained soldier they still have the capacity to raise levies, which doesn't add up numerically.........Anyways good work and thanks for the back-to-back chapters.
The numbers of the armies are a bit unbelivieble, specially the Reach, as they are now poorer. How could they increase 50% (from 80k to 120k) of their army, when they have less money (due to the food, and for backing the Targaryens), less people (due to the 2 consecutive wars), instead of coming from 20 years of piece since the last war. Not counting that everyone had loses of men during the 2 wars. Specially when most of them use Levies, so that means that most of the men (even farmers, crafters, etc) were used for war.
Thanks for the chapter! I know I am very critic, but I'm still grateful for your work! Don't forget that the Faceless Men are actually assassins, and not spies. And MC can teleport and use magic... so this Top 6 Most dangerous People of Westeros could be easily be killed whenever one of them is too troublesome. By killing the head, many would try to become the new head in power.
i dont see why aryan doesnt just want to conquer westeros, the north is simply too small for it to stand alone for long. by sabotaging them from the inside through the faith he couldve caused such social upheaval that uniting them under the old gods and advancements of the north wouldve been easy. it just seems a little shortsighted from him. while your writing is def better then the previous writer i find your aryan getting a little preachy