ElderKwon
A question: is Baby Daena Tyrell from MC? It was hinted that she had purple eyes, and she didn't exist in Canon. Even though, in the story, MC had s*x with Janna Tyrell (sister of Mace), instead of Aleria Tyrell nee Hightower (wife of Mace). She is introduced at ch23.
shouldnt moat catlin have a major city around it due to the canal? it doesnt matter all that much but it is hard to call ppl barbarians when you see a new city that just so happens to be one of the most triving trade ports of westeros. i did not get the feeling of a changed north here, just a big castle. and really callint moat catlin more formidable then the eyre or castly rock? the moat cannot be taken because of the swamps leading up to it, not because the castle is on top of a mountain like those other two
Thanks for the regular update. Ned will return in one year. So, the fight for throne would have stated by then, if you killed the Robert. It will be interesting to see the fight for throne without north interference. Will North will be supplying the weapon to other kingdom? Because North can earn more money doing that.
Thanks for the chapter! In my opinion, Benjen's Torrhen and Lyarra were enough as their children. Cregan and Serena only make the Stark Family overcrowded. Especially if MC wants to have more children, as Leon + Twins (male and female). Ned Family are 5, Benjen are 4, and MC is currently 3. The Stark family is already overcrowded in this generation. Imagine the next generation LOL. They are going to run out of North Houses to marry them off. By then, every Lord in the North are going to have Stark Blood, and they will be in line for the throne. MC needs to protect House Stark from their own blood.
No.... too short. Great as always, I am wondering if it will blow up, that prince will do something and either Arry do something to him in secret or the break will start here. I do wish magic was a bit more pronounced, it doesn't feel like a crossover in anyway. Make up some plot with the children to say they gave him magic or something, the reason I say this is if the south attacks, considering the others are coming, it would be the most beneficial to the north if he uses magic to kill many of the attackers or scare them or stop them somehow since it seems he is going to such length to hide the magic Im getting xinaxia MC vibes of pretending to be weak. He almost let his uncle die in the north from the Others to hide his magic, its a bit contradicting with him saying he will do anything for his family.