Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Rise of Mandalore

I was actually excited about this story at the start but i don't like where this is going so im gonna wish you the best but I'm out

Jinx looks like this.

I'm just disappointed. You hyped up his skill, hyped up his intelligence, hyped up his training, and hyped his fighting ability. But you have him making so many rookie mistakes. Plus your throwing out so many things at once that I can't read this chapter without getting irritated. I'm gonna stop reading for now, and come back to see if I can continue to enjoy this later.

This story is kinda all over the place. I mean there’s no natural progression; it’s written more like a power point then a book -mc is dead -mc is alive -mc is at a auction - mc is getting fisted by a literal GOD!! Jeez slow down lol

Thanks for the chapter

Nice

Thank you for the chapter

He should've added force powers in his wishes or just force power immunity at all but what, he didn't now he's getting beaten up by almost everyone cause of that dumb no-force user thingy of his.