Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Rise of Mandalore

This is just too much. I hope I don’t get bored from it in 3 chapter bc he is already OP but not a force user. I wish you would just use the Star Wars universe power system instead of mixing so many others.

... Oh, it's wish story, with one wish turned into many, like always. I'm done, bye. These are just so supremely cringe and bad.

I'm confused about all the franchises you said earlier. Are you gaining the knowledge of those universes? just tech? wha

Thanks for the chapter

You lost me at cannot be a force user.

Did you intentionally omit 40k? It is a broken Universe so some of the tech might be useful. Example, Adeptus Astartes > Spartan. I think Custodians are still viable since their creation shouldn't require any Warp tom foolery.

Nice

I thank you for the chapter.

hmm idk tbh mc is irrelevant hes almost useless compared to her 😔 also couldnt she just give him medichlorians

gwens gonna be sleeping around with her memories sealed

very touching 1st chapter

.... tbh i rly dont like the writing style of: Person 1: bla bla Person 2: blabla And so on... It rly hurts the reading flow I suggest you use something around this format: „Bla bla.“ said person 1 while thinking about the problem. „Bla bla bla.“ interrupts person 2. Just a suggestion ^^ But it rly reads better then this script-style writing :)

SW has nano tech will he use that as a weapon or to give himself nano machines son

MC got plot armored by ROB, he takes over the Universe and get the girl. The End. Not rly my cup of tea to have this stupid amount of plot armor, specialy on the get go and without having to earn it, so i'll be droping this... Such a shame, i was hooked by your synopsis and was looking forward to your story...

I'm confused with all the abilities some of which are pointless 😕. like the blood bending why blood bend when you can already use the force.