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While I appreciate your work and how consistently good you novels are, I have to say that I grow more and more tired of staring a story only to have it dropped like a bag of dirt after less than 100 chapters every time. You aren't building true long term fans by dropping and creating novels like this, and it tends to alienate them because you dropped a story they enjoyed without notice to start a completely new one... I wish you luck, but for me your stories are getting moved to a reading list until I remember they are an option and notice that they have new chapters, probably far in the future.
buddy I love and support your stories but the second person point of view creeps me the heck out, it's like if someone was dictating my life as I go along and it's irritating when it says "you" to me. kind of like an itch in the back of my head that I can't seem to find. good luck on this book though and if you enjoy it then all the better, I'll just wait for your other books in the meantime.