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Comments of chapter undefined of The Fairies Tail

Endless_Suffering
Endless_SufferingLv2Endless_Suffering

I guess people here don't know what quests are

BookDragonling
BookDragonlingLv4BookDragonling

I now know what 2nd person perspective writing is. Why would anyone do this to themselves? It's like a constant 4th wall break and it's a no go for me.

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

The narrator is narrating to himself. why would you do this? lol I honestly don't think ill be able to look past it if it keeps up.

noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Lol, i feel like im the narrator in mc’s head, narrating things to him. Cuz when i read “you” i feel like im telling it to the mc rather than myself. lol

Darkened7
Darkened7Lv3Darkened7

it feels weird reading his name as "you", but oh well, ill still read it, atleast its better than an mtl

coldpyr0
coldpyr0Lv14coldpyr0

While I appreciate your work and how consistently good you novels are, I have to say that I grow more and more tired of staring a story only to have it dropped like a bag of dirt after less than 100 chapters every time. You aren't building true long term fans by dropping and creating novels like this, and it tends to alienate them because you dropped a story they enjoyed without notice to start a completely new one... I wish you luck, but for me your stories are getting moved to a reading list until I remember they are an option and notice that they have new chapters, probably far in the future.

Juno_Fisher_01
Juno_Fisher_01Lv13Juno_Fisher_01

This looks interesting im looking forward to more chapters

RavenW0lf
RavenW0lfLv4RavenW0lf

thanks for your hard work but this type of writing isn't for me great job anyway nice content

Klynt_The_Frog
Klynt_The_FrogLv4Klynt_The_Frog

Author, Why are you writing in 2nd Person? Does it come easy to you? Or are you uncomfortable with writing in 3rd or 1st Person? :\

WolfLord
WolfLordLv14WolfLord

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Arron_
Arron_Lv1Arron_

When does this take place? I know very little about FT but i know there is a time skip in the middle, so does this take place then or is this a 'After canon' fic?

Paulo_D_Manoel
Paulo_D_ManoelLv11Paulo_D_Manoel

man I hate this second person perspective,so cringe, and I wanted to read, but not gonna now.

Bendy0999
Bendy0999Lv2Bendy0999

Nice

RaijinGod
RaijinGodLv11RaijinGod

Great start, I’m really loving this so far. Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

AEGIR123
AEGIR123Lv4AEGIR123

+++++++

riser
riserLv4riser

this is going to be fun

Damian0481
Damian0481Lv13Damian0481

and another ff ruined with a 2nd pov

GawS
GawSLv5GawS

thanks for the chapter 👍

RedRize
RedRizeLv1RedRize

rubbish writing style

eiportillo
eiportilloLv13eiportillo

buddy I love and support your stories but the second person point of view creeps me the heck out, it's like if someone was dictating my life as I go along and it's irritating when it says "you" to me. kind of like an itch in the back of my head that I can't seem to find. good luck on this book though and if you enjoy it then all the better, I'll just wait for your other books in the meantime.

Tarantula_Paragon
Tarantula_ParagonLv5Tarantula_Paragon

kek i keep finding jordino's ffs without seeking them for some years now...